Review 35: Wild Lilies

Wild Lilies, the first of the NOLA Shifters series by Angel Nyx, is another book that I won in Facebook readers’ group give away. (I admit, I’ve had some good luck in those lately!) I always promise to post a review for those, and I have a backlog waiting for me, so let’s knock off another one.

I love paranormal romance stories, so I was happy to have a new shifter series come to my attention. I haven’t double-checked, but I think this may have been an early release for Angel Nyx and it’s not an attention-getter.  There are metric tonnes of shifter romance stories out there, so you really need to have some unique variation to stand out from the crowd. Wild Lilies is a cookie cutter effort – there is nothing here that you haven’t read already, many times.

Independent young woman runs away from overbearing father. Check. Jaded, slightly older man who thinks he’s too damaged for love. Check. They are fated mates. Colour me surprised. Nothing about how they exist or act as shifters is different or unique. Even the sex scenes are a bit flat, as they come across as being described as great by the characters, rather than giving you the visceral experience of a hot and sweaty time. The only thing which might have promise for an ongoing series is the interplay of the allied and enemy shifter groups.

Sadly, the proofreading was sadly lacking. There was a lot messed up punctuation throughout the whole book. Many extra spaces, unpaired quotation marks, that kind of thing. It doesn’t effect the story itself, but it does raise my irritation level. If Bookbubs has discounts on more of the series or I can convince my library to pick up copies, I might read more to see what happens with political interplay, but I’m in no rush. I’m giving this book two stars.

 

Review 34: Reckless Beat Box Set

I won the first book of the Reckless Beat series, Blind Attraction, on a Facebook group giveaway. Before I got through my TBR to read it, Bookbub gave away the box set of the first three books, so I snagged it. I’ve just finished reading it, so here on my thoughts on the start of this series.

In general, I enjoyed it enough that at some point, I’ll get around to reading the rest of the series. The characters are fairly well developed and since half of each couple is a young rock star, I cut them more slack. Going into that kind of environment before your personality is fully formed is bound to have a stunting effect, so I cut them some slack that I wouldn’t for an “average” person. When they behave more like children in some situations, I can forgive it more easily (and it does make more tension in the plots.)

The ladies also have a set of backgrounds that have made their lives challenging and are pretty crazy, without being completely unbelievable. Unlikely, but not impossible. The sex scenes are steamy, there are some funny moments, and I definitely enjoy all the snark and sass that the band members throw at each other. The editing is solid, I have no complaints there.

Overall, there is nothing that really stands out in this box set to earn extra stars, but it’s a solid rock star romance effort. I give it three stars.

Review 33: Sweet On You

KC Enders latest release is set in the universe of 425 Madison Avenue, a collection of stories tied together by an apartment tower in New York City. I received an ARC of the story, in exchange for my comments and a review. I have to say that I feel a bit conflicted about how to approach this – I am a fan of Karin’s work and I consider her a friend. However, the quality of the editing in the ARC was…disappointing.

The story is very appropriately named; it’s a short, sweet story that just tugs at the emotions and makes you smile. The heroine is an enthusiastic, talented baker who has been burned in the past. The hero is a single dad dealing with a selfish ex and his own discomfort in a big city. Living on the same floor of 425 Madison Avenue, they are continually thrown together by a temperamental smoke alarm.

Normally, I’d happily give this story three and half or four stars. Unfortunately, the editing in the ARC is subpar; there are punctuation problems, homophone errors, etc. These are all a normal part of the writing process, but should be dealt with in the edits. As a friend, I sent her some notes about the worst of the mistakes that I hope was helpful. The characters and the plot deserve a better presentation than the publishing company allowed to go through to the ARC. However, I’m hopeful that the final release will be better and allow the charm of the story to shine through, so with fingers crossed, I’m giving it four stars.

Review 32: Being There

A friend of mine is a T.K. Rapp fan, so I wanted to try a book and see what I thought. To be honest, I chose this one primarily by price point, which means that it’s also an early release from Rapp. I’m not going to form a final opinion about their work based solely on this book, which is good, because I wasn’t blown away.

The heroine in this story is unfortunately not an uncommon type – she had a unpleasant experience and has somehow allowed it to dictate her life choices since then. I’m not one to advocate comparing how “hard” your life is, but honestly, I’d classify it in “life experience” category, not genuine trauma. But somehow her whole emotional development from late teens to young adulthood just stops because of this one thing. You are free to disagree, but to me, that falls into the category of manufactured drama to create some kind of plot. It’s lazy and irritating, so I can’t really recommend this book.

To be honest, I didn’t pay as much attention to the writing and the state of the editing, because I was kind of annoyed. It can’t have been too horrible or especially amazing, since it didn’t make enough impact for me to remember. At some point, I’ll try a newer release and hope the situation has improved.

Review 31: Country Road

Country Road is the collected five books by Andrea Johnston that revolve around the bar by that name. The individual books are Whiskey & Honey, Tequila & Tailgates, Martinis & Moonlight, Champagne & Forever, and Bourbon & Bonfires. I didn’t make a note, but I’m pretty sure I got the collection through Bookbub for free or on discount. I’d seen posts about the various releases through the Facebook group, Nerdy Little Book Herd, but they hadn’t gone up my priority list until this opportunity came along.

Overall, I’d rate this series as a solid 3. It’s all good, but nothing outstanding. There are funny moments, but it’s not a comedy series. There are sexy times, but nothing scorching hot. There is some angst, but nothing really heartbreaking. The writing is decent and reasonably well edited, although some errors did capture my eye.

I’ve noticed that, unsurprisingly, the more that the story captures my attention, the less that I notice editing slips on the first time reading it. Since I read this box set once and noticed multiple errors, it’s definitely a sign that the stories weren’t really sucking me in. I have no desire to re-read the books and the details are already slipping from my memory. Overall, I don’t think anyone would regret purchasing these books, but they won’t be on my “must-read” list.

 

Review 30: The Fighter

This was a book that I got for free through Bookbub. The author, Emily Gray, is new to me. I don’t remember what the blurb said that enticed me to try it – I generally like an MMA story. This turned out to be an underground fight club/mafia-style story, which I don’t mind, but this was disappointing.

A young couple, Ace and Cat, find themselves in debt to a…well, it’s never really explained what his role is, just that he has the power and connections to save Ace from the police. Ace pays that debt by becoming a fighter and Cat is pulled back in 10 years later, after getting her medical degree.

The characters are simple and flat, with no depth and their actions are pretty much straight out of the predictable trope playbook. The hero is trained to fight and becomes a cold, hardened man but he can drop that facade in an instant when his love reappears. She goes to medical school and then works in an emergency department without apparently learning anything about people. The main villain is slimy and malevolent in a cheap, stereotypical way, even to his own detriment. The secondary villain is complicated is some unexplained and unpredictable manner.

This is a fairly short book, which meant I could finish it quickly. I kept hoping for some development in the plot or characters that would redeem it, but it never happened. The writing was straightforward and easy to read, which was nice and it appeared to have been fairly well edited, something that I always appreciate. Overall, however, I just can’t recommend it.

Review 29: HOT Seal Hero

HOT SEAL Book 7

Lynn Raye Harris’ world is continuing to grow. The plot arcs have carried us through the original HOT team, and now into the second team, the first SEAL team and the mercenary team. HOT Seal Hero is the latest installment, and in some ways, it more closely resembles the earliest books. This one does not touch on the ongoing concerns with corruption in government and CIA. Instead it’s a standalone story touching on a current concern in the US – armed militia.

The romance between Ryan and Chloe develops fairly easily and naturally. The roadblocks are mostly internal, stemming from Chloe’s trauma, experienced in HOT Ice. (It’s not necessary to have read the earlier book, but it can’t hurt.) The difficulties of developing a relationship with an active member of a special military team have been well covered by this point in the series. But I like that the guys on the teams have learned from their teammates’ romances and don’t fight so hard. Ryan hasn’t been looking for love, but he doesn’t run screaming when it pops up.

I consider this one a solid installment in the series, although it’s not my favourite.

Review 28: First and Goal

I won a copy of this ebook in a contest on a Facebook page. I had never heard of the author before and I really had no idea what the book was about, beyond a quick scan of the Goodreads blurb. First and Goal is the first in the linked series Moving the Chains, by Kata Cuic.

Because I didn’t do a heck of a lot of research on this one, it caught me by surprise that it ends on a heck of a cliffhanger. Going back to the Amazon description, it does mention this, but I missed that detail. You think you are getting the HEA epilogue and *bang* – what just happened??!? Now to be fair, this is not a short book at 363 pages, so don’t think it’s one of those series where they charge full book prices for a short story and it turns out to be one book portioned out in five purchases. You get a full read.

On to the book itself. This is one of those books that I have trouble really placing, because although the characters are “young adults”, in this case, really young adults because they are all in high school, they have an emotional awareness that I find rare in most of the population, regardless of age. Not necessarily emotional maturity, mind you, but their inner landscapes are incredibly well-examined. In some books, I find this off-putting, just because I consider it unlikely, but sometimes the characters and the writing overcome my objections, and this is the case here.

It’s true, in movies or books, if the dialogue entertains me, I can forgive a lot of other problems. I realize this is not true for everyone, so that’s your grain of salt. The main plot here relies on a bit of that “drama for its own sake” craziness that usually turns me off, but at least here I can forgive them because a) their age, b) there is actually a lot of character development, so they are learning as they go, and c) it’s not over the top. Eva and especially Rob really did suck me in, and for a group of high school kids, they have an interesting and fairly rich supporting cast.

If I had more disposable cash, I’d likely be buying book 2, but it’s definitely going on my TBR. I’m giving this one 4 stars on Goodreads.

Review 27: Butterfly Ops, Book One

It was long enough ago now that I don’t remember which author page Jen Doyle did a takeover on, but I was lucky and won an EdenBooks gift card from her. Of course I used it to buy the first book in her trilogy and I saved the rest, in case I wanted more of the set.

I haven’t read a lot of sci fi romance, because I’ve found the majority of it to be alien males needing to breed with human woman for . Fair enough if you need a handy hook to write some straight up smut, but not something I need a steady diet of. The Butterfly Ops takes a more robust stab at the genre, although to be fair it’s probably more solidly in the contemporary fantasy arena, since it features vampires, super heroes, and a host of folks with assorted mental powers. But the appearance of government forces mucking about with genetic alteration pulls it to the sci fi side, at least to me.

Sadly, the writing in the first book doesn’t quite live up to the promise of the concept. It’s slow. “I almost didn’t make it passed half way” slow. There is a whole lot of bait dangling and far too much inner character angst, while nothing much actually happens. As an editor, I would have cut out a couple of chapters at least. Fortunately, it picks up in the final third; not a lot but enough to get to me to finish it. This is definitely in the range of an epic length book broken into three parts for consumption, not a series. There’s no great cliffhanger, nothing is resolved, it just kinda stops.

Leaving aside their inclination to sit and steep in their own angst, the main characters are reasonably appealing. Or at least, they have potential. And that’s why I’ll likely read Book Two. I want to see if these two can reach their potential. Once they muster up some courage and get a few pokes from friends, they finally start acting like mature adults and talking to each other!! And that’s why I’ll likely read Book Two. I want to see if these two can reach their potential. And I want to see their damn mission actually get started! They make it through a whole book without doing a single thing about the problem that’s brought them together. Irritation is not a reliable motivator when it comes to books, but in this case, it seems to have worked.

Review 26: Illicit: A Contemporary Romance Collection

I bought this story collection when it was on pre-release sale. It hit my radar because an author whose work I’ve enjoyed has a story in it. It seemed like a good opportunity to read more of her stuff and get an introduction to a bunch of new authors.

Sadly, it turned out to be quite disappointing. The stories were a 3/5 at best. I just finished reading the collection and going through the titles, there’s probably close to half that I could barely give you any description of the titles or characters. They didn’t suck me in at all. In the end, I only finished it out of a fading sense of hope and some weird determination.

But at a certain point my judgement was probably affected by the fact that this collection was so poorly edited. Incorrect punctuation, missing punctuation, spelling errors, homophone errors, just plain wrong words – and a lot of them. I don’t know whether these authors normally skip editing or if there was some rush behind getting this collection out, but either way it’s terrible. There’s a lack of professionalism shown that is hugely disappointing. To be fair, the stories aren’t all bad and aren’t all in desperate need of editing, but sadly there are more in that camp than not.

Overall, I just really can’t recommend this one at all. I’m giving it 2 stars on Goodreads.